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Let Us..

You say
You are the darkness
So let me be
Your flash of lightning
Dancing through the shadows
Of our souls

While our hearts
Play Chinese whispers
With our subconscious
And acrylic flavoured lips
Sing across our skin

Let us wander
In the delights
Of our passion
As our bleeding hearts bleed

Like water torture
And ticking clocks…

Thumb-ling with illusions
Of yesterdays…

We’ll regret
And let time stand still…

As we read the brail
Of each others eyes
Cherishing candy coated moments
And watch as they burn
To ashes
In each others arms

We’ll whisper
Perfections in the flaws
Of our love
And we’ll rise once more
Finding freedom
In our monochrome rainbow
If we just…

Let us be.

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  • Night-lord
    May 25, 2008
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    A roller coaster is a good analogy to use. Interesting theories I enjoyed it.

  • I love the theory applied to make your poetry so beautiful..and bringing the message quite clear though with its intriguing tones as well well done...

  • Cwm
    May 3, 2008

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    whoa hun, this was fun to read! It was like riding on a lover's rollercoaster! Loved the analogies here.. good language hun, well done.