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Carrie

Your face,
heart-stoppingly beautiful,
I will never caress.
I know that you could never love me,
as much as I wish it were so
Cursed by the stars, I must undeniably be
It breaks my heart
that I will never be able to hold you close to me
I wish I could forget your eyes,
your raven black hair, always clipped back
the intoxicating scent of your perfume, as you walk past
the way your wink makes me melt
As I think of you now,
my heart breaks,
I hold back the tears that scream to be cried
If only you were younger,
or I older
if you were like me
If only you prefered the sparkle of a woman's eye,
to the dirt-crusted, egotistical person of a man
If only you loved me
God, if only

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God, life is cruel.

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  • XxshadowprincessxX
    June 19, 2008

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    if onley if onley....

    i feel the same way for this one girl....oh, i need to let her go...get over it and all,its just so hard...dont you just wish you could read it too her and have her say the same things back...like she thought you didnt like her....very good


  • FaeryMouse
    May 4, 2008
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    Nicely written....I can feel your anguished over the love of someone ....