I have the propensity to brood over Mondays
where skies, painted gray, hang like dirty sheets
stained with rainbow colors, cloud my unbelief
while indulging myself and growing apathetic
on the silver, lining my Friday afternoons.
A contest entry
- Somewhere Deep In Your Mind by Errant Panther.
460 points, ended May 10, 2008, 24 entries
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Intriguing piece, though brief, holds much truth to the way most people live through the drudgery of their daily working life, to longing for the special family life that can be captured in the breath that is the weekend.
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