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Sighs upon Memories

Sometimes I wish what it would be like if something you wished for came to be.
Sometimes I wonder what life would be like if someone cared.
Sometimes I wonder how things would be if someone looked inside of you.
But you know what? It never happens.
I live in a world where nobody understands,
A horrid place in which you are separated.
Separated from your family,
Living off the energy of your friends.
I wonder what life would be like if people took the time to notice...
To understand, to love, to know.
How I rejoice upon happy memories.
But what is now, is now.
Now is a world of sadness, a world of darkness.

So now, I just wish.
But we all know it will never happen.

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  • Amazon Huntress
    May 11, 2008

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    Very sad and thought-provoking poem, you've just opened your mind and heart right onto the page. Just one thing - in the forst line should wish be wonder?
    Thanks for entering!
    *~Huntress~*


  • Angelflower
    May 3, 2008
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    This was a very interesting read.. Thank you for your entry and best of luck to you...

    Angel