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ღ When your right next to me... ღ

You will never know how you make me feel
The emotions you cause to stir inside my body
Or how everything just seems to fade
    When your right
  Next to
Me...

Every care in the world is gone,
My heart stops beating,
My breath seems to halt,
Eyes locked with yours,
Fingers interlaced...

ღ ღ ღ ღ ღ ღ ღ ღ

Only you matter now darling...

ღ ღ ღ ღ ღ ღ ღ ღ

Can we stay like this forever?
I want to be right here, by
Your side, cause I know that
Everything will be okay if your here

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  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    August 2, 2009

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    Sometimes all we need is that special person in our lives
    to help turn everything around. It's a wonderful feeling
    when you find someone that makes you feel this way all
    of the time. I hope that this individual comes back to you
    and that you find yourselves in a world of unending love!
    Take care and all the best to you with your entry here!




    Jeremy0826


  • storiesuntold
    July 17, 2008

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    First love

    This is very sweet and do remember if he truly loves you and you him you will care for each others hearts and think before you act for when you are young things move too fast and often hearts get broken . When you are young you sre still learning so protect your heart
    and stay away from drugs and you will be fine

  • celadia
    June 18, 2008

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    Love the hearts, and the thoughts behind this, it is a truly happy poem and it's good to read both sad and good.


  • transit
    June 11, 2008

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    ooo

    beautiful poem with such real feelings. I like how you describe nothing else matters when you are beside this person.

    The lines which divided the stanzas are pretty and do add a good touch to your work overall. I hope this does stay forever.

    transit~


  • nessa7
    June 8, 2008

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    this was such a sweet poem
    its nice to have someone you can love
    and be there for and them do the same
    hope everything stays great good poem

    nessa


  • Pleasantly Insane
    May 28, 2008

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    touching

    i love it. i know how you feel, when you love someone its all you need. beautifully writen. good job.

    ---pain of the angels---


  • Re-invention silver member
    May 26, 2008
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    aww so sweet... lovable and happy.. lol like it alot.. good luck!


  • LovesPlayToy
    May 12, 2008

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    that such a cute love poem... that is very well written

    i give threee thumbs up(if i had thumbs... tee hee)


  • Heavens Child
    May 3, 2008

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    Awww.....what a precious thing to have someone that you can feel so close to. Nicely written.

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