If ever love did fail me once,
then never will love fail me twice.
For time reveals all vices hidden,
where honesty was once forbidden.
So this I vow
before my Lord:
that You, my love,
I e'er adored.
Please tell me what you think
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I like the change in rhythm of this poem... the sentiment of the last stanza is beautiful and I really liked the way that it changed in tone... beautiful
Keep writing
Polly
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