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Vespers

In the damp coolness of an old Mission
the dust of dirt floors raise
ghosts of whispered prayers
for long dead lovers

Ushered in by the hush of dusk fading
into shadowed vestibules
candle light thrown
over roughly textured walls.

An offering given
a prayer of confession
belief repeated
in silver amulets

candles flicker
as the swish of robes removed
swiftly reveals
porcelin holding

Rose petaled incense
lavendered holy water
a different form of worship
echoes a different form of prayer

Vespers
lasting long after
the bells had rung
rousing pigeons

Now resettled

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  • humblpye gold member
    August 3, 2008

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    Blown Away...

    Once more, I cannot offer you the words that haunt my heart... so I wrote you a poem, it's in the mail


  • leo2
    May 12, 2008

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    Talk about a prayer being answered... This one would be just what the doctor ordered for me! Thanks for the reminder of better times.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long