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Tiny Moments

I carry you softly

gently tucked within the folds
of my memory

each tiny moment
of joyfulness

protected with love

occasionally I visit

playing scenes of joy
through mind's eye

cherishing as I smile

reliving each tiny moment

a smile
for the joy

a tear
for the passing

grateful
for the chance

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  • glowtime
    July 4
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    Happy sad

    How happy and sad is this. Our loved ones live on in our precious memories.
  • celadia
    May 9

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    It sounds like you're remembering your baby, it's very touching, I feel it's good enough to be published.

  • aww I dont know what to say this is a powerful poem my dear Kimmy. **hugs Kim and sits on the couch and eats cookies and has long giggly girly talks*

    Love you Momma Bella!

  • GunRunner
    May 4

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    Wow.

    I can't imagine what it's like to lose someone that close, but they say memories are allw e've got sometimes . . . very beautiful words here!

  • james119
    May 4

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    this is sooo good

    You have beautifully captured the bittersweet moments of remembrance. These lines touch the heart of this fellow who has lost children.

    • Thanks so much, James. I don't understand it all, sometimes I feel so lost in this world, but I do appreciate those tiny moments and come along and pile up within my memories.
  • so softly handeled the poetic journey here in wonderful words ..thanks for sharing it and good luck in my contest..
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