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Fingered Sun

 

 

 

 

The sun has fingered my skin

every morning for so long,

played along every flutter of

protesting eyelids,

in the slither through dusty

shades and sheer curtains.

 

The flush of flesh feels foreign

today more than yesterday.

Early moring birdsong chirps

like a ringing in my head;

and I used to savor the sound.

 

His limbs are no longer nested

in between the sun's fingers,

soft breath does not follow the

notes sang from tree tops,

and I feel I will drown beneath

never-ending cycles of scream.

 

Often I wake with head beneath

the refuge of my pillow,

trying to mute the day yawning

herself into hopeless existence;

where everything right

has a way of proving you wrong.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

• "Self-pity in its early stages is as snug as a feather mattress. Only when it hardens does it become uncomfortable."

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  • I do like this we all need a little bit of hope and this poem states that nicel very well penned thanks for sharing much luck

  • Namita silver member
    May 8

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    "where everything right
    has a way of proving you wrong"

    Yes, the dark sad days... but wake up to the beautiful song of birds, and the light of the sun... throw away that pillow, and then only, shall the bright, brilliant sun shine on you

    - namita

  • I sure do know how this is! Will send extra z to you. Glad to see you grace us with your presence again. Love Juls

  • I love the line "the day yawning herself into hopeless existence" - simply beautiful. And the last line is perfect for this. I like how you've mixed the comfort and familiarity of a bed and morning with the emptiness and frailty of missing a loved one. Well done!
  • this is perfect for the quote - although, I am sorry to hear you find mornings this way
    take care of yourself & family first, Trina


  • Nicolette gold member
    May 3

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    Good to see you writing again! If only all people could pen there daily schedule as poetically as this. I just woke up - so can relate to this very much. Lovely, real life poetry.

    ~ Nicolette

  • Beautifully expressed and seems like you have taken your busy schedule and penned it from a personal point of view. I don't know how you do it, taking care of a family and school as well as cake making. s hun, so glad to catch up with you. Love, C

    • Sweetheart, if it were not for the grace of God, I could do none of it. Truly He is my strength. I usually wake early and stay busy until late. I did three cakes last week, two just last night. I had homework in both classes everyday but today. Tomorrow I have a 750 word essay due. I had a birthday party today for my friend's kids. Keep the house up, the kids, husband, etc. Not to mention trying to find an extra 30 minutes a day for exercise! I have two more cakes due on the 11th, a sheet cake on the 17th, and a baby shower cake on the 26th!
      • Lol You make me tired just reading it! If there were sainthoods for mothers and partners you would be on top of his list!!! God bless hun. Love, C
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