Waiting, watching
Looking out the window
The world running past
As she waves from the darkness
They Fear the unknown
And hate what they don't understand
As they search for the answers
Secretly she loves the fear
While pretending to be lonely
Author notes
Let them hate us, as long as they fear us.
Caligula
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1000 points, ended May 16, 2008, 14 entries
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Very perceptual words and I can feel the emotions expressed, not just by the person, but persons within that carry our pain, our joy, and all. Good write!
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This is great twin and your form of poetry really adds to it! I wish you luck.
~Kystal Angel
The prompt was good and the poem is better! ;D
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wow... love powerful;
Secretly she loves the fear
While pretending to be lonely
those lines seem to fill me up... good write love good write!
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This is excellent and sad
I know of times I felt just like that alone and many windows in my life I have stood at wishing there were someone to talk to but in a strang town amongst strangers
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Strong words my dear. Very nicely done!!! I can actually relate to this in my own personal way. I wish you all the best!
Linda
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Wow.. that's fascinating!! Like how you've made it that she loves the fear, while others fear the unknown... she likes the control it gives her!
Brilliant.. I love this
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Let them hate us, as long as they fear us.
Caligula
Good luck
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