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Rainy Day

Its incredible that I feel this way
That sunshine smiles and trees will sway

Incredible how you make me feel
I wish it would be something real

To know I'll never have you stay
In my arms for another day

To realise that this all was fake
This happiness I had hoped to make

You broke my heart and turned away
Said "today is just a rainy day"

When really I had died inside
To know you would not be my guide

I trusted you, you made me sane
Now your intentions are very plain

You were never looking for something real
Just looking for something new to steal

I watched you as you walked away
This hole in my heart will forever stay

It was incredible how you made me feel
I only wished it would be real

Author notes

option one - hope you like it

oh, and this is not meant to be angsty... look at is as a feeling of surrender or hopelessness...

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  • nobodys-girl
    May 4, 2008

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    aww i really do like this. it's so sad and it hurts to think you have someone and to only learn that you never really did. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!