these moments offer peace
as I drink their sight
releasing thought
as colors blend
with autumn’s glow
the sky will fade
above withering trees
and birds will fly
from chill in air
life is also a journey
through autumn’s glow
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF/10/10/Picture Inspired by AliceinPoetryLand.
525 points, ended May 4, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Congratulations on the silver. It ia amazing how one's perception of and appreciation for beauty changes when they reach the autumn of their life. May you be blessed with many more rewards and peace.
Sincerely,
Leo Long -
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Leo
I so cherish your comments. Thank you for the blessings. Frans
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Beautiful
Wow Fran this is one of my favorites. So soft and so true. I love the imagery and the flow. Nature always brings to light if we take it in the realities of life on a real spiritual side. At least in does for me. autumn's glow, just beautiful!!
Much Love
Your Friend
Kelle Marie
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I admire your metaphor for life captured here - my Autumn Glow has withered into winter I guess but maybe it is still (just) hanging in there. Loved it, Frans. Keep on truckin'
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Excellent
My favourite season and you have captured it so well. The whole poem is great, though these lines capture the visual splender of this time of year;
"these moments offer peace
as I drink their sight
releasing thought
as colors blend
with autumn’s glow"
Thanks for sharing.
Cheers
Mark
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A very soft and beautiful piece. This flows so majesically. Thanks so much for the images you have penned here.
Gaylene
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I love autumn - always call it the season of leaf-poetry... like this poem. Wonderful spiritual touches here, Frans..a journey to the "glow" indeed.
~ Nicolette
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