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gold...Gemini Mind

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Flexible is my life

I think in minds of two

One dreams of freedom to explore

the other on thoughts of you

 

Today I want to see the world

and go back into space and time

While another thought I had today

is put a stop on hate and crime

 

Everyone should be happy and laugh

let others enjoy their fun

Life is too short to criticize others

wasting time on them

will slow you when you run

 

I want you for my partner

for I love you with all my heart

I will always be loyal to your love

If you commit to me from the start

 

I realize you're not a genius

and have ideas of your own

Your promise to love me forever

will definitely keep me home

 

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We Geminis are a curious lot and always on the go

We analyze and criticize while following our natural flow

 

Our childish personality is evident, that's why we like to play

The imagination is unlimited and leads our mind astray

 

Flitting from project to project, restless as a butterfly in May

We like intrigue, and excitement of the chase until we catch our prey

 

We are the chameleons of the zodiac and reflect every change

Our versatility makes us adaptable, situations we rearrange

 

Being attracted to the philosophical and the intellect of the mind

The Sagittarius holds our interest being loving and kind

 

Emotional and loving, excitement and variety we crave

Life with a Gemini is never dull, for a partner who is patient and brave

 

 

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  • So true!

    Being a Gemini, it was a treat to read about the real me.


  • just mercedes gold member
    February 2

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    I like this - you explored Gemini traits really well, and showed how their partner fits in. I can relate to this, being a fellow Gemini, once married to a Sagittarian!

    Congratulations on the trophy.

  • Rambunctious
    January 10

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    I always wondered about the Gemini. Thank you for your poem and it teaches me that Gemini people are not mad, just contrary...lol...

    Well done, Mussie...

    Ron.

  • im a gemini too! i love the poem by the way.


  • Gwenevere
    May 9, 2008
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    Congratulations on Gold, Ros


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    May 7, 2008

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    sunchaser

    hahaha well I think the the evil twin took over my ex. Excellent write on the sign Gemini. You did a great job with this good luck in the contest.


  • eleni
    May 6, 2008
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    Well Done!

    Great write here - I love the duplicity of the emotions and the couple's everlasting love for each other. You depict the traits of the star sign Gemini in a very enlightening manner! Thank you for this wonderful poem and good luck in my first contest!


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 4, 2008

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    Very well expressed and versed with good flow!
    Profound in it's message!
    **I am also Gemini (June 14)
    --Well Done & Best of luck in the contest!


  • Sagerider
    May 4, 2008
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    Great write

    We have so many diverse dreams, often conflicting.

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