When I make love to you
I fantasize that I am a warrior
who's just stolen you away
from my enemy's tribe.
I watched from the river's shore
as you washed your long black hair.
Your bronzed body parts the waters
as your breasts lift on the ripples.
I fall upon you quickly
as the swallows juke
above the currents.
I take you in my arms.
In your eyes I am a wild man.
My muscles tense as I hold you.
My skin touching tantalized
softly upon yours.
We ride upon winds of desire
making our get away
Into a meadow lit by the moon.
It is there you deflower.
We join under in the cool air
and a chorus of stars sing
deep into our souls
as magic of desire dances..
My soul deep into yours.
Your soul deep into mine.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- TURN ME ON! by Sylvyrwyng.
1000 points, ended May 9, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark and Twisted Desires 2 by Darkend.
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Comments
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WOW
This is very different from every other poem I have recieved for this contest. It is very tastefully erotic and evokes the imagination. Well done indeed. I commend your bravery with such a piece! Thank you for entering and best of luck! -
beautifully poignant and sweet. while it did not leave me breathless, it does leaving me wishing for my own warrior to carry me off and ravish me. Great job!
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