Once I had a glimpse of you
I was dreaming
Immersed in the thought of you
Love left me a mirror image
Not exactly or precisely
How I remembered or imagined you
Your smile, your stare, drew me in
I thought I felt you touch me
Or was it just a breeze
Had you whispered something to me
Or was I still halfway in a stupor
Awake and also dreaming of you
Hoping I would see you clearly
And someday return to the love
That we had both lost
And encase ourselves
Into that wonderful light and emotion
We both want to remember
A contest entry
- Somewhere Deep In Your Mind by Errant Panther.
460 points, ended May 10, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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There's a very sad and haunting undertone to this piece, clever use of everyday language to stir the emotions. thanks for sharing and best wishes.
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Such a sad but sweet poem. Thanks for sharing
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