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Summer Vacation

the words have been stripped
from the doors and the walls
your sweaty kiss is supposed
to last me the next four months
it's raining in this town
and the gas light's on empty
the windshield wipers are going
but they can't help me
my bank account's gone
and all i want is to be
in your bed with your drunken
body lying next to me

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  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    June 8, 2008

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    A very intresting piece.sounds like this may not be a very good summer.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.


  • happyhippychick
    May 5, 2008

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    i don't know if it's because i can visualize a lot of this from experience or not, but i like it a lot.
    i especially like "your sweaty kiss is supposed to last me the next four months"