Don't you wish you knew me,
that you could peer inside my mind?
Looking around to find who i am,
But i'm hidden to well to find.
You don't know me,
It might be better that way.
I'll not reveal myself,
that i'll not reveal myself,
no matter what you say.
Your friend you think you know,
Is only a cover.
The one you've always seen,
is another you'll have to uncover
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My "friend" started a rumour about me, and it got out of hand
Comments
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Some how this piece confused me just a bit.
Sometimes I am a bit on the slow side. So
please forgive me is I don't fully understand
what you are trying to say.
This piece was well written
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
good lck in my contest.
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