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Adam (Or an experiment in reading)

You will call it the way we mix

I'll call it "quit fucking with me"

These S.O.S pattern worlds
of beautiful bubble blowing babies
shouldn't have died for you

I know your secret love

I know your password bullshit

Semantics

I am well kept on the spread of it all

and yes I am a poet

So, I guess you still think
We're going to live forever.

Please tell me what you think

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  • ears2hearyou gold member
    May 31, 2008
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    the candlelight wept,

    dripped the blood of retribution,

    as hounds of hell howled..bent

    down to their knee's begging

    for pity and his mercy. 

    Betrayed powerfully by one

    tender kiss...upon which he

    hung himself in mourning light,

    cursing the name of Judas forever. 

    Releasing powerfully the flood gates

    as a single candlelight lit the darkness

    exposing the path to eternal life. 

     

     

  • Eric Nunnally
    May 30, 2008
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    I'm at a loss.

    I just don't get it. Can you offer some context?


  • Naughtygrlred
    May 4, 2008
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    well i plan to live forever....


  • Naughtygrlred
    May 3, 2008
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    busy huh?

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