When I'm with you I find myself
pouring out the contents of my soul.
Like a spring fed stream
my thoughts flow into you.
You see my dreams
and tell me
I am not insane.
You tell me yours
and I can see the star.
Our love melts
the mountain ice.
Together
we have become a river
deep and wide:
Flowing as one
to our ocean.
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- SHARING SOME LOVE by TwilightPanther.
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Comments
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kewl!
This reminds me of the phrase I heard once on a show, "that one does not love them as much as on the first day you met them, but with every day that passes you love them more cause you know them that much better", well done I liked this very much.
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O' my what sweetness...Flowing as one to our ocean...Together we have become a river...I do love the feel of your words...Thank you so much for sharing and enter
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Lovely metaphores. Beautiful POem
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