Tears laced with pain
S
L
O
W
L
Y
Sink into scars
The ones you left me with after you left
Into a world where neither of us could safely tread
You doubted my love for you
Your heart beated with wounds I never made
You left me
Why…
Why couldn’t you see?
That I’m not like those girls
That I don’t care what scars you hold...
That I was honored you loved me
That you graced me with your love…
But like them you played me...
You gave me my own scars to hold
With your poisoned lips you whispered
Words that were tainted
I love you…
You disillusioned me
But I refuse to wilt
I still love you my love
Where ever you are
Eternally
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When we lose one we love, our bitterest tears are called forth by the memory of hours when we loved not enough.
Maurice Maeterlinck
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Comments
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awww I feel like this is written about me.. I can relate to all that you have written in this poem all the from beginning to the end. love is something I yet to achieve, perhaps I need to wait a bit more.
excellent take on the prompt sweetie
good luck in the contest
mommy
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When we lose one we love, our bitterest tears are called forth by the memory of hours when we loved not enough.
Maurice Maeterlinck
Good luck!
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