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Vines of Love

Vines of Love


Beneath
nights sky
two hearts glow like
                Fireflies…

Sheltered…
beneath
a canvas of
          Love…

As sweet
kisses graze
my raspberry
            Lips…

Like
a white zinfandel
our love grows in
                        Vines…

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  • Tam
    May 7, 2008

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    wow...

    this is such a wonderful use of 30 words! very well done...
    I love the feeling this evokes in me...
    a joy to find here!
    Thank you for sharing your time and talent with me! I’m delighted my three favorite things inspired your Muse...
    Blessings! Tammy


  • Amera gold member
    May 5, 2008

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    This is lovely! In just a few short words you have penned a classic love poem that melts the heart. Well done!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 4, 2008

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    Excellent use of 30 words--Admire the reference made to
    a 'White Zinfandel'!!
    --Well Done & Best of luck in the contest!


  • daviscth
    May 4, 2008
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    The imagery in this is simply amazing Susan. I just love the whole piece. It sounds so magical....


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    May 3, 2008
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    creationsfromheart

    beautiful write. Good luck with it Sis

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