I think of you as a soft wind
blowing gently across the land.
You have come to me like a friend.
How sweet it is to understand.
This road we travel will curve and bend.
At times it will be difficult to withstand,
But, if we hold each in deep devotion
we will survive life's commotion.
We can last together through the tears
standing hand to hand as one.
We can conquer all of our fears
as we gambol to our shiny sun.
We will have our share of cheers
until our time together is done.
Come with me! we can climb mountains
resting high next to clearest fountains.
For our time is but a simple test
as two can find their hearts in place
With each there is strength in rest
when we wake from sweet dreams face to face.
We can fill our lives with proper zest
as we take each others embrace.
For life is not meant to be lived alone
and the thought of that chills me to the bone.
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NICE!!!
I think of you as a soft wind
blowing gently across the land.
You have come to me like a friend.
How sweet it is to understand.
This road we travel will curve and bend.
At times it will be difficult to withstand,
But, if we hold each in deep devotion
we will survive life's commotion.
Excellent rhyming in this stanza!!! I absolutely loved it...and love your style...Nice write!!! -
Good write
especially the first stanza, first few lines



