In a weird sort of way
I stopped by today
And took a view at what you’ve become
At first, I could see
Anger like electricity
Sparks shooting from your eyes
Since I’m gifted at detection
You are my reflection
Life’s mirror playing tricks on me
Author notes
In the U.S. we say Tons - so how much are points shipping costs from U.K. to U.S.?
A contest entry
- LOADS OF POINTS--come lookie by lovelight05.
1750 points, ended May 18, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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great write! I enjoyed it a lot!
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great write! I enjoyed it a lot!
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This is catchy; quite
lol by the way I made your other poem into another poem and also into a contest theme; I sure do hope you don't mind...smile...I just fell in love with that title(the french of it)thank you and good luck in this contestlol
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Good poem, and an interesting take on the title. Thanks for the entry.
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thank you
I appreciate the time you took to read my poem
S23
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