under the moonlight
one shadow moves up and down-
you come inside me
Author notes
dedicated to...ahem
Comments
1 - 16 of 16
-
Oh damn, now where did I put that shadow? Alas, poetry such as this is only a dusty memory for me now but thanks for the reminder M'Lady. Ahem, should be smiling right about now....lol.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
-
OMG~~
Holy Moly Guacamole!!
I read this and if I was drinking
It would be all over the monitor
Yep~ it sure would be...
HOT-...look my eyebrows are singed
Love this one Mari~~
You are Good
a momento
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
-
-
You have hotter ones, like m³ hotter lol
Now and then my mind takes a naughty turn
Thanks beautiful one; loves to you too
-
-
Looks at film...
Muwahahaha Mari
runs faster than a speeding snail
-
-
-
Art for art's sake, indeed!
-
a hot summer night, moonlight and a heavenly body in total eclipse...h
-
Smokin hot, and beautifully done. By far the best erotic-ku I have ever read!
-
excellent~
Beautiful
And sensual as well....without going overboard
Love this sweet sis
Excellent sis
Hugs
Susan~~~
-
Seems many Ahem's are all still dreaming or blushing
*Cat*
*Cat* *Cat* *Cat*
-
I think I get it. It's about a person on a pogo stick who arrives home at night and hops inside the house, it's from the homes perspective of course. Excellent personification! The internal moaning sound is of course just the home settling on its foundation. That is simple enough!
-
-
You got it almost right. moan thing was the wooden floor, you know old house even older floor, or the other way around
-
-
Mi querida hija,
I love sensual poems but, as it's Sunday, shouldn't this sexicu be in the 'adult' category?
Triple applause for the moving imagery!!
Mucho amor. besos y abrazos XOXOXO
el padre.
-
-
adult was/is one of the categories dad
Thanks for stopping by
-
-
damn...why didn't you warn me? LOL
-
-
and spoil the surprise
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 16 of 16
