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night encounter










under the moonlight
one shadow moves up and down-
you come inside me











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dedicated to...ahem

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  • leo2
    May 10

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    Oh damn, now where did I put that shadow? Alas, poetry such as this is only a dusty memory for me now but thanks for the reminder M'Lady. Ahem, should be smiling right about now....lol.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • MariGoes gold member
    May 4
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    Thanks Nic
    Did you find the moon, better yet, did the shadow(s)find it?


  • Desire gold member
    May 4
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    OMG~~

    Holy Moly Guacamole!!
    I read this and if I was drinking
    It would be all over the monitor
    Yep~ it sure would be...
    HOT-...look my eyebrows are singed
    Love this one Mari~~
    You are Good
    a momento
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


    • MariGoes gold member
      May 4
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      You have hotter ones, like m³ hotter lol
      Now and then my mind takes a naughty turn

      Thanks beautiful one; loves to you too

      • Desire gold member
        May 4

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        Looks at film...

        Muwahahaha Mari
        runs faster than a speeding snail

  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    May 4
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    Art for art's sake, indeed!


  • Peteskid gold member
    May 3
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    a hot summer night, moonlight and a heavenly body in total eclipse...h


  • Mallig gold member
    May 3

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    Smokin hot, and beautifully done. By far the best erotic-ku I have ever read!


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    May 3

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    excellent~

    Beautiful
    And sensual as well....without going overboard
    Love this sweet sis
    Excellent sis
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Kitesen
    May 3

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    Seems many Ahem's are all still dreaming or blushing



    *Cat* *Cat* *Cat* *Cat*


  • Yemassee silver member
    May 3

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    I think I get it. It's about a person on a pogo stick who arrives home at night and hops inside the house, it's from the homes perspective of course. Excellent personification! The internal moaning sound is of course just the home settling on its foundation. That is simple enough!


    • MariGoes gold member
      May 3
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      You got it almost right. moan thing was the wooden floor, you know old house even older floor, or the other way around

  • hugh wyles silver member
    May 3

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    Mi querida hija,

    I love sensual poems but, as it's Sunday, shouldn't this sexicu be in the 'adult' category?

    Triple applause for the moving imagery!!

    Mucho amor. besos y abrazos XOXOXO

    el padre.


    • MariGoes gold member
      May 3
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      adult was/is one of the categories dad
      Thanks for stopping by

  • ardentMarch gold member
    May 3

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    damn...why didn't you warn me? LOL

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