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Love ME

Loving me for who I am

in the very beginning.

Nurturing my passion

to become as One.

Without any doubts,

you take my hand in belief

holding me at bay of your

most precious thoughts.

Caress my skin,

as if it were your own,

and in this I surrender

unto your palms

as they mold me

inside and out.

Upon the sun's light

casting reflections of your face

as I awake another day,

in a Blessing of your presence.

A single rose

lie next to me,

'Just Because'

you Love Me...

only 'Me' with

all of my Imperfections,

kissing them tenderly

as my Soul,

become whole again

in you.

Sharing beyond any

words, that can

explain...but

your actions

speak of Bold and vivid

truth.

(pause)

You...Love Me

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    June 27, 2008
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    Damn I read this already i guess i will comment again you know i admire and love this side of you hon a great deal ~ jazz ~

  • mcheadle
    May 25, 2008
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    Lovely write

    May you find your romeo and be happy as in the fairy tales your friend ....mac


  • D Saul So Sexy
    May 8, 2008

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    Damn this was nice i wasn't expecting to even read all this here ma wiff you most certainly know what you want


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 6, 2008

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    Beautiful Piece

    Each time I read your wonderful words of honesty, you move me.. and I'm one of many who are blessed to read your kind soul. Thanks for always being a friend, and pen on. Another winner in my eyes.

    Peace, Timothy.


  • HoneyFire
    May 6, 2008
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    lovely write!
    A wonoderful and lovely person


  • moluv10
    May 5, 2008

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    I love the way you wrote this dear. So truthful. your words flow so effortlessly and create a vivid picture in ones mind. Best of luck in the contest.

  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    May 3, 2008

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    ooooooooooooooooooooh! this is so damn on point! damn you made my heart drop piffy! he better trophy this dammit i love it good luck


  • crazymomma
    May 3, 2008
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    Beautiful! sounds like my dream guy too.But, I have actually found him. Good luck in the contest


  • secberm
    May 3, 2008

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    Well done, sister. Just to be accepted for who you are... Hmmm... I wonder if that dream can come true. LOL Write on and good luck. One.

    Dez


    • Ephiphany
      May 3, 2008
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      Thank you so much

      Dez, yes it is possible
      I appreciate your comment on this, as I always do my friend.


  • ennovy silver member
    May 3, 2008

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    As always you write some very beautiful sensual words, and the balance, flow is awesome. A wonderful free verse....................G'Momma


  • MahoganyFlow
    May 3, 2008

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    "Upon the sun's light
    casting reflections of your face
    as I awake another day,
    in a Blessing of your presence"...U should know I would love this part. This was beautiful sis. Enjoyed reading your words. Keep Writing!


    • Ephiphany
      May 3, 2008
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      Hey...lookie...lookie

      her comes cookie Love the new pic sis. Thank you for the comment, yes I knew you would love that part

      e


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    May 3, 2008

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    Beautiful words you have penned
    here my dear friend! It's great
    to read you again and I hope that
    you are well! Take care and good
    luck to you in this contest and
    always!




    Jeremy0826


    • Ephiphany
      May 3, 2008
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      Hey J

      thank you, yes I am well hope you are too.
      Muahhh


  • HaleyMary
    May 3, 2008

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    Beautiful write, Sis. I liked the part of being loved for the imperfections. I think that shows a feeling of true love in life, when people accept others for who they are and don't see the things that some people may usually associate with faults. I think sometimes the faults can be the best part of people. I would rather be with someone with imperfections than someone who seemed perfect all the time. At least imperfections shows that a person can be real. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

    • Ephiphany
      May 3, 2008
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      Thanks you precious one

      I always appreciate your support. I know that I have expressed that once before, but I just want you to know every chance Im allowed to say...Thank You!


  • darell
    May 3, 2008

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    Beautiful!

    Sweetie this was tenderly affectionate
    and lovely. I could feel so much emotion
    wrapped up inside your words.
    You are an incredible talent with a
    flare for touching the inner spirit
    and releasing the beauty that is you.
    I loved it and you very very much.
    Bravo on writing another excellent poem.

    • Ephiphany
      May 3, 2008
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      Heyyy

      Thank you..
      so much for this well appreciated comment.
      One of my moments this is what came to mind and I went with it until the very end.

      I love you as well, and thanks again for being here.

      E


  • Dark Otter
    May 3, 2008

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    Another side

    to our nature. We are multi-dimensional people. Trying to get across the sensitve, fragile side of our ego is a challenge that pushes us. Good luck in your contest.

    • Ephiphany
      May 3, 2008
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      Thanks Amazira,

      yeah another side, definately my friend. The contest prompt was to describe your Ideal Man...and this is what came to my mind It's not all about baby blue eyes, muscles, and material things. What's in the heart and strength in beliefs.

      I appreciate you once again dear one.
      Ephiphany

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