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Rulekeeper's Sonnet

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Rules seem to some restrictive, yet shine clear,
Use constants which, adhered to, may on stream
Leave scope to nurture interaction’s dream.
Exclude debate on what may not appear.
Know though respect is earned through trust not fear,
Expression free essential is where teems
Especial inspiration writing reams,
Partial blocks or locks must disappear.
Expose those lacking judgement, censure drear,
Reviewers’, moderators’, hack backed schemes
Stop short when will will spill its inner s[cr]eams
SOul finding way to cast off false frontier.
   Net could play be for all to interface,
   NET should stay free or fall through, splinter, waste.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Final couplet each syllable rhymes
Net could play be for all to interface,
NET should stay free or fall through, splinter, waste.

pillow words in brackets s[cr]eams use both screams and seams

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Comments

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  • Bravo!

    This was great! So articulate, so perfect,
    so in your face original and SO Jonathan!
    Wonderful...take a bow! Jane


  • azlyn gold member
    May 4

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    This is so well crafted! I could never do one of these...I am too impatient with things!!!LOL! I enjoyed this very much! Thanks and best of luck!

  • A fine english sonnet that combines your talent for word play and acrostics with great flow and rhyme. I liked the flow of ideas in this poem and the overall tone. An interesting poem that has a lot of truth to it. I liked the way you expressed your thoughts and feelings. A brilliant poem.

  • Superb

    Cools, I really like this one, and thought you expressed yourself quite well. Good luck with the contest.
  • This is really cool. I like the "s[cr]eams thing a lot. You are quite talented.

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