Ok so most of my poems are about people or about things i want but i think i need to mix it up a little. I'm going to try to just write. It wont be about people or experiences i have had its just gonna be what ever i come up with. So here it goes:
I lead her to the bed watching her every move.
The way she moves shows her every curve.
Her low rise blue jeans and her short tight black top shows off her perfect hips.
As she sways back and forth i feel my excitement Begin to build.
She pulls me close and places her hands on my stomach under my shirt.
This sends shivers up my spine.
She looks I'm my eyes and kisses my lips.
She pushes me down on the bed and makes me watch her.
She grabs the bottom of her shirt and pulls it over her head.
She looks perfect standing in front of me in her jeans and bra.
I can see her hip bones and can see the outline of her almost existing 6 pack.
She is so beautiful standing there looking at me with hunger in her eyes.
I can see her breathing faster getting more excited.
Her excitement drives me further into my own excitement.
Her hands move to the top of her jeans and she tugs them over her smooth hips.
She strands in front of me in her boyshorts and bra.
I can feel my dick getting harder as the blood flows through me.
She moves to me and stands me up pulling at my shirt.
She pulls it over my head and then undoes my pants and watches as they fall.
I stand in front of her with my hard dick showing through my boxer.
She turns around for me to undo her bra and of course i do it.
She lets it slide to the floor and faces me so i can see her naked breast.
She feels my dick against her flat stomach and she knows what she wants.
She walks to the bed and lays on her back waiting for me to join her.
I stall for a second looking at her perfect body waiting for me on that bed.
I walk over to her and climb on top of her kissing her neck.
I let my hands run over her smooth skin and over her breast.
Her nipples harden under my fingers and it excites me more.
I move my hands down to her panties and slowly inch them down over her hips.
I kiss my way back up her legs and stop at her inner thighs.
I nibble her skin as she moans begging for me to keep going.
I do keep going until i reach her waiting pussy.
I kiss her clit and use my tongue to move her further into pure Ecstasy.
I move my tongue over her clit a few times and then move it in circles.
My tongue never touches her clit as i keep the circles going.
Every once in a while i move my tongue over her clit.
After about two minutes of the circles she starts to pulse.
I here her moans become louder and more intense.
I know shes getting close to cumming.
I want nothing more then to taste her loving juices.
She moans louder and i feel her shaking.
She is so close to to edge all i need is to give her one last push.
I use my index finger to rub her clit while i push my tongue deep inside of her.
The pulsing get faster her moans get louder and then she reaches the edge.
All i can think about is how good she taste inside my mouth.
I let her finish then move up so I'm laying next to her.
Shes still breathing heavy and she turns to kiss my lips.
I know she can taste her juices on my lips and that excites me.
I lay back knowing she needs time before shes ready to go again.
She lays her head back trying to catch her breath she is still naked and shaking.
Once she has settled down she runs her hand down my stomach inside my boxers.
I let her rub my hard dick knowing it will help make her excited again.
As she moves her fingers over me i start to squirm under her hands.
She can see my chest heaving up and down and knows I'm enjoying her touch.
Her hands work me up and down as i begin to shake.
I turn to kiss her lips mine still sticky from her pussy.
She knows she has me close and now she has worked up her apatite again.
She takes her hand out of my boxers and pulls them down to my feet.
She climbs on top of me and settles down on top of my hard waiting dick.
She rides me slow at first arching her head back while moaning.
She goes a little faster wanting me all the way inside of her.
I moan along with her loving the feel of her pussy around my dick.
I watch her hips move back and forth as her breast move with her.
She is so beautiful and so good at filling my every need.
We rock back and forth together savoring each others body.
She is close to the edge again and i join her ready to cum.
She leans down and kisses my lips and whispers in my ear.
"Babe i want you to cum for me and i will cum for you."
On that note i begin to cum placing my hands on her hips pushing in deeper.
She begins to cum with me and she lets out on final moan before she collapses on me.
She rolls off me and we both lay on our backs looking at the celling.
I can hear her breathing as she can hear mine.
Tonight i filled the needs of the one girl i will always love and she filled mine. We will repeat this night often as we should. Her beautiful body will always keep me wanting more. AND I WILL HAVE IT AGAIN.
I lead her to the bed watching her every move.
The way she moves shows her every curve.
Her low rise blue jeans and her short tight black top shows off her perfect hips.
As she sways back and forth i feel my excitement Begin to build.
She pulls me close and places her hands on my stomach under my shirt.
This sends shivers up my spine.
She looks I'm my eyes and kisses my lips.
She pushes me down on the bed and makes me watch her.
She grabs the bottom of her shirt and pulls it over her head.
She looks perfect standing in front of me in her jeans and bra.
I can see her hip bones and can see the outline of her almost existing 6 pack.
She is so beautiful standing there looking at me with hunger in her eyes.
I can see her breathing faster getting more excited.
Her excitement drives me further into my own excitement.
Her hands move to the top of her jeans and she tugs them over her smooth hips.
She strands in front of me in her boyshorts and bra.
I can feel my dick getting harder as the blood flows through me.
She moves to me and stands me up pulling at my shirt.
She pulls it over my head and then undoes my pants and watches as they fall.
I stand in front of her with my hard dick showing through my boxer.
She turns around for me to undo her bra and of course i do it.
She lets it slide to the floor and faces me so i can see her naked breast.
She feels my dick against her flat stomach and she knows what she wants.
She walks to the bed and lays on her back waiting for me to join her.
I stall for a second looking at her perfect body waiting for me on that bed.
I walk over to her and climb on top of her kissing her neck.
I let my hands run over her smooth skin and over her breast.
Her nipples harden under my fingers and it excites me more.
I move my hands down to her panties and slowly inch them down over her hips.
I kiss my way back up her legs and stop at her inner thighs.
I nibble her skin as she moans begging for me to keep going.
I do keep going until i reach her waiting pussy.
I kiss her clit and use my tongue to move her further into pure Ecstasy.
I move my tongue over her clit a few times and then move it in circles.
My tongue never touches her clit as i keep the circles going.
Every once in a while i move my tongue over her clit.
After about two minutes of the circles she starts to pulse.
I here her moans become louder and more intense.
I know shes getting close to cumming.
I want nothing more then to taste her loving juices.
She moans louder and i feel her shaking.
She is so close to to edge all i need is to give her one last push.
I use my index finger to rub her clit while i push my tongue deep inside of her.
The pulsing get faster her moans get louder and then she reaches the edge.
All i can think about is how good she taste inside my mouth.
I let her finish then move up so I'm laying next to her.
Shes still breathing heavy and she turns to kiss my lips.
I know she can taste her juices on my lips and that excites me.
I lay back knowing she needs time before shes ready to go again.
She lays her head back trying to catch her breath she is still naked and shaking.
Once she has settled down she runs her hand down my stomach inside my boxers.
I let her rub my hard dick knowing it will help make her excited again.
As she moves her fingers over me i start to squirm under her hands.
She can see my chest heaving up and down and knows I'm enjoying her touch.
Her hands work me up and down as i begin to shake.
I turn to kiss her lips mine still sticky from her pussy.
She knows she has me close and now she has worked up her apatite again.
She takes her hand out of my boxers and pulls them down to my feet.
She climbs on top of me and settles down on top of my hard waiting dick.
She rides me slow at first arching her head back while moaning.
She goes a little faster wanting me all the way inside of her.
I moan along with her loving the feel of her pussy around my dick.
I watch her hips move back and forth as her breast move with her.
She is so beautiful and so good at filling my every need.
We rock back and forth together savoring each others body.
She is close to the edge again and i join her ready to cum.
She leans down and kisses my lips and whispers in my ear.
"Babe i want you to cum for me and i will cum for you."
On that note i begin to cum placing my hands on her hips pushing in deeper.
She begins to cum with me and she lets out on final moan before she collapses on me.
She rolls off me and we both lay on our backs looking at the celling.
I can hear her breathing as she can hear mine.
Tonight i filled the needs of the one girl i will always love and she filled mine. We will repeat this night often as we should. Her beautiful body will always keep me wanting more. AND I WILL HAVE IT AGAIN.
Author notes
its very long and its ment to be that way. the build up is the best part. ok so this is writin in a guys point of viwe and i never imagined it would be this hard. this took me hours to write so i hope everyone likes it.
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Comments
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SWEEET!!!
Nice descriptive piece here that is very vivid and detailed, aroused my....... senses

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woah
ok...there is quite a few mispellings and I suggest using spell check...Please and thank you... but other wise... I LOVED IT!!! It was so raw and naked... Beutiful... thanks -
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Ok i think i fixed most of them. sorry about that
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o...m...g. ^.^ this was hot, babe. like.. uber hot (
'uber' ^-^) You're seriously talented.
i agree with sorrowfulwoodnymph when she says that its good you ended this piece on love.. and not lust.
Keep it up ^^



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This story is great and so honest.
i like that u ended the story about love and not about sex, bc that's what really counts most of the time.
i hope my frist time with my bf will be this hot!!!! ;D -
Nice!
To write from another perspcetive is very hard...this is a nice read...very provocative...I hope to experience a night like this real soon...lol...great piece..-Josh

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