The Bridge

A draw bridge awaits far in the distance,
where both new and old, harmoniously

*resonate*

No thoughts of regret, or precious losses,
only glorious love and

*endless*

ambiance.

*Unconditional*

love, the music playing,
Sweet scent of grass and the first rain.

A place we

*all*

will meet more than once,
for our circle is never complete, never closes.

I long to be there, to meet those waiting,
not yet, not yet, I still have plans

*elating*.

Author notes

Image is titled "sky smiles"

A contest entry

Somewhere Deep In Your Mind by Errant Panther. 460 points, ended May 10, 2008, 24 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Errant Panther
May 10, 2008

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Emotion is so deeply and uniquely expressed in this piece, Unusual and interesting format in which it has been presented also. Lovely creativity, best wishes to you.
Daredevil
May 3, 2008
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Excellent write..not yet, not yet, I still have plans elating..I love it..Good luck my friend!
kiwigirljacks
May 3, 2008
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Aww this is lovely bro!! I felt myself taken there on a little journey...
Angelflower
May 3, 2008

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wow! remind me to never enter a contest with you in it.. I will for sure lose..lol. You did a wonderful job here hun.. You did the prompt justice which is a hard thing to do.. yet again a great write.. Best of luck hun..

Jetleena
- Unconscious-Energy
  May 3, 2008
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  Nonsense jet you write like the best of us...
- - Angelflower
    May 3, 2008
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    like the best 3 year old ..lol. I'm ok at writing. not one of the best though..lol.
StarEyes
May 3, 2008

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This is just amazing!! What a great job you did!! And that picture is super!!! I love the message in this one.. Left a on my face!!

Best of luck in this contest!

and love

Nyetta
Unconscious-Energy
May 3, 2008
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Why thank you grasshopper..lol what did you write tonight?
Angelflower
May 3, 2008
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Oh. can't wait to read it!!!! come on lazy butt!! lol. best of luck hun!!