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Violin Man

And the strings all worn thin on his
violin, made in 1885 out of ivory
and irony in a pawnshop not far from
the traintracks; which traintracks he never
bothered to remember - they lead home,
and home had no roof and no walls;
home was a palindrome.
The violin man kept Frankfurt marks in
his case -they were given as a praise;
impossible to exchange for anything but
pebbles to throw at the competition,
the same men he once played with in a cafe
under the bridge, with Danube water as the
drink of the day.
He don't know Vivaldi, but neither do we;
lately all we hear is what we see; not what
is right, but what is left - and what is left is only
a temporary explosion of tone; something easy
to condone and this is why with an eventful grin
the man will sell the violin.

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  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    May 21, 2008

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    Close to my heart this... I have a small collection of violins amongst other instruments, they ooze character and I just love the instrument. I am only a novice still learning to play though.

    Anyway... a great theme to play with and I think you have done a magical job with it, describing this ones settings and journey onwards.
    Heh' perhaps this is one of the ones I ended up with!

    Sol