i was there in a dream
i coudn't make a move i was so scared
i leant to the side to the gate
it was split open i made my escape
i grabed his hand to help him out
we all got out from none to 28
we ran and ran to make our escape
we turned around he was there
he grabed me by the neck
his grip was to tight to escape
i slamed my foot dow
he let go
we ran and ran there was no escape
from corner they were there
we ran sly
we ran quick
"lauren"kane said
"you will always be there for me!RIGHT?"
he said as his lips touched mine
we were together forever
and thats all that matered now!
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- Night Terrors by deadheartedkitty.
450 points, ended May 9, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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verry nice
this was so sweet and innocent, it is a verry good write comming from one so young...
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Great job, weonderful. Very creative. Good luck and stay safe.
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