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Kalm

To look into the eyes of Kalm
and find a place unseen.
To be held in his arms
and know that he is not mean.

To wake from a
horrible dream,
and scream a blood
chilling scream.

To wipe away a tear,
and discover a lie.
To get rid of a fear,
and look toward the sky.

To walk toward the edge
hoping not to fall.
To realize that Kalm
was the cause of it all.

I wrote this poem just because I could. Hope you like it!

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  • peregrin
    July 26, 2008
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    I like it, it is really good.
    Talk to me anytime.


  • daddy joker
    June 21, 2008
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    this is really good keep it up


  • Bard-of-Shadows
    May 6, 2008
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    I like the way you rhymed this one. Very good.


  • witefox
    May 4, 2008
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    ....

  • Katelyn-94
    May 4, 2008

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    Like a bunch, glad I took the time 2 c ur poems. Wish it was longer tho, to examin conflict that made Kalm the cause. Go see mine, por favor, Bliss is the best fyi, the rest were teacher assnmnts, lame, i know. Hope u like. Was fun talkin 2 u.


  • crazymomma
    May 3, 2008
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    Sad and full of emotion. I don't really understand "kalm" instead of 'calm' though


    • witefox
      May 4, 2008
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      kalm is the name of the character. i chose kalm because if i chose calm people might get a little confused.


  • sasori-the-dreamer
    May 3, 2008
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    kk. just wonderin. good poen nonetheless

  • sasori-the-dreamer
    May 3, 2008
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    nice

    is Kalm a boyfriend?

    • witefox
      May 3, 2008
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      sure

      he is a boyfriend that stays in my head and almost never comes out.

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