wherever I see,I see you,
like a cloud in front of me,
in flowers and even on dew,
once I used to see joy within me by only your thought,
now if I remember it's like a moment fought,
once there were sparkling eyes,
now there are tears in tides,
no matter how much the pain will burn within,
there is a smile above my chin,
my heart is doomed now,
one more chance it will not allow,
the damage has already been done,
but it still thinks you are the one,
I learnt the deeper the love is,
the harder is to forget the bliss,
I have now known the meaning of love,
but seeing you in the sky everyday,
"there is no such thing as love",is what I say,
the only boon companion I have is my cat,
wish I could be like her loving only fish and fat,
I still see the beautiful rose buds,
but now they mere tears of blood,
now days now and then i do smile,
but from within it never comes,
it has become only a facial expression for style,
that too it stays only for a while.
A contest entry
- Somewhere Deep In Your Mind by Errant Panther.
460 points, ended May 10, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Initially when I read the repetition in the first line I thought, oh dear, but then the rhyming came together with the imagery to create an enchanting tale of love still held in a heart for one who has passed. well done and best wishes.
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Thank you very much.
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Wow
This is very beautiful..the flow of emotions is excellent..All the best in the contest!
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