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My Obsession

Burning embers sizzle inside
Fueling the upcoming anger
Life's to precious to be taken away
Yet sometimes it has to happen
Does anyone see the secrets

Hidden beneath the surface of this face
A fear everyday that she'll be gone
Return home and a message waiting
Explaining it was her time, she passed
Her funeral will be on this date, hope you can come

Why must she be dying
Denial fills my mind
Telling me this isn't happening
She won't be on her death bed in August
But soon enough reality will take over

Unfortunately the time must come for everyone
For her it has come far to soon
Tomorrow is never promised
Don't take today for granted
Please save her so there can be a tomorrow

So far away, yet so close
I'd give anything to have you
Held in my arms
At least then I'd know you're safe
Even though your slowly burning out

The light seems to be dimming
Your outlook seems to have fallen
Don't give up hope yet
The strongest make it through the roughest times
I will guide you through your pain

You are my tears, the rain of the May skies
The reason I chose to take another breath
The voice in the back of my mind
My hope, my inspiration
Most importantly my obsession


Author notes

option 22


the inspiration:
My friend whose supposedly going to die of some unknown disease thing in August. She's only in 7th grade and my best friend. <3

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  • rumandwine
    May 3, 2008
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    AMAZING

    supposedly?
    unknown disase thing?

    nice.
    yourmybestfriendtoo babyyyy
    iloveyou


    • xhowxtragikx
      May 3, 2008
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      well they could save you
      and they dunno what it is therefore it is unknown haha

      love you sweetie <3


  • redhanded
    May 3, 2008

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    very nice write...

    so sorry to hear about one of your friends so young indeed but this is a great piece of work you have here...keep up the good work and best of luck in my contest.
    andi
    (redhanded)