When summer ends,
Fall begins,
And the colorful leaves start to drop.
Floating with ease
On the cool autumn breeze
In a pile , they finally stop.
Next to a jack-o-lantern,
Who smiles so bright,
Who's candle-lit face shines on Halloween night.
All the colors of fall come together,
Red, orange, yellow and brown.
Gathering, gathering like birds of a feather,
Summer is gone,
And fall is around.
Author notes
I wrote this poem when I was in fifth-grade, for computer class. So, yeah...
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Comments
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Great write.
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I like this poem its nice. Its very good for a fifth grader thanks for entering I enjoyed reading this it sounds beautiful! Good luck!
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This is wonderfull. The imagery is so vivid. I think even if I had never seen the season change I could know from these words. Great poem! Especially considering your age.
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Thank you. That is very kind. Have a great day!
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This was really good for a fifth-grade computer class.
I really liked the flow in your words, they created a good image of the seasons changing.. Well done.. I enjoyed reading this.
Angel
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Hey, thanks. It's really nice to hear that.
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No problem, you did a great job..
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