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[ My feet dangle into the cool lake ]

My feet dangle into the cool lake
As the sounds of frogs, fish jumps and fireflies
And a tall glass of white wine
Whisk me away to my perfect place

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  • Tam
    May 7, 2008

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    ahhh...yes!

    what a perfect place this is too...
    very well done poet!
    Thank you for sharing your time and talent with me! I’m delighted my three favorite things inspired your Muse...
    Blessings! Tammy


  • crazymomma
    May 3, 2008
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    Nice imagery. Do fireflies make a sound? I guess they do. I just never noticed. Good poem