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Brittle Beginning

Pumpkins pressing themselves
into the soil, leaching every
bit of warmth against mornings
that regale themselves in
silver trappings
Baskets line up like soldiers,
awaiting the heavy pull of produce
piled high by eager city hands.
Sun squints, unsure if it
wants to shine or just hang
in a foggy morning mist
Gloves hold hands as they await
some brute task
Leaves drip tears onto
frosty soil that gulps them,
licking its stony lips.

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  • Namita
    June 4, 2008

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    Lovely poem. Such an interesting and beautiful write on September. Really brings out the soul of the month. Thanks for entering.

    Namita


  • Malabu
    May 16, 2008

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    you have touched upon september

    and the joys of harvest can only be appreciated
    after the labor of the day

    nice
    Mal