It’s all right
It’s quite all right
That I try to make things right
They turn out of sight
And throw themselves back to me
Just irking me
It’s depressing
It’s surely depressing
That when I tend to turn away
You come back to fully amaze me
With your love
The love I try to battle
Sometimes I can’t wait to get away
Can’t wait to escape this place
Because you’re in my life
Yet I let you back another day
For a piece of myself is mislaid
A piece that I battle another day
A battle that I’m afraid to escape
Loving you, or loving anyone is depressing
It’s nothing but self-fights with no resting
If I could take it all back
Without having to face these facts
That this isn’t doing me any good
I would
Oh yes I would
Here’s the thing
The best thing
Sometimes I think of my times
Where I could be able to find
Solutions for myself
Infrequently, it’s hell
Because I’m giving it all to you
And yet I’m still blue…
But I’m fine
I’m just fine
I’ll love as if no one were there
While being utterly fair
To not only you, but myself
So I wouldn’t feel any hell…
It’s all right
It’s quite all right
That I make things right
But they turn inside
And flies right back to me
But I’m not through
Not done loving you
For I hide the thoughts
Exploding inside and abroad
You take away the pain
Leaving my insides to rattle
That’s why loving you is a battle
Author notes
Yeah, love is really messed up..even when you try to resist it..i actually don't know what's worst than to agree with it and have a lot on your mind..feeling bad when that person isn't around..or trying not to love them and be pissed off about it..
Written December 17th, 2003
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel by LostInThought.
250 points, ended December 22, 2003, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awwwwwwwwwww. This is good Tiffy. Ya, love is good, but its sometimes bad. I like the las two lines the best-
"Leaving my insides to rattle
That’s why loving you is a battle"
*Thumbs up*
-Kamz-
Edited on Dec 24, 10:10 p.m. because ''. -
blantant
there are a lot of feelings in this and they fly right at you.the contest ask that there be feelings and the feelings in this work are so obvious and so blatant.you can feel the pain that loving has inflicted.the mixed emotions of how to deal with the whole scenario is displayed quite boldly.good luck!~
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