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Flight


Flight of many miles
to avoid the frost
If it should occur
so many will be lost

Fragile in existence
so beautiful to view
But you can’t save them
there’s nothing you can do

Millions in flight
they barely make a sound
No one even knew
that they were around

On and on they fly
on this journey of silence
Like a magnet drawn
into perfect existence

Clouds of wings in flight
cover all my skies
the impact of this sight
is a wonder to my eyes





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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    May 17, 2008

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    Beautiful, especially the third stanza, it says a lot. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


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  • crazymomma
    May 3, 2008
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    Wonderful imagery. I could actually see the butterflies. Great job!