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Drown Me Please






Pour the words into my heart
Let the water turn white
tumbling to a waterfall.
Submerge me in your passion.
Drown me with your desire.
Let your kisses be the ablution
I have always dreamed of.

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  • perfectsunset
    August 16
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    Aww so beautiful even in its brevity.
    Passionately penned!

    Thanks for entering
  • individuality gold member
    May 3

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    ah love, to drown in the rippled wave kisses and still go under the water with a smile, a good piece of poetry.