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tempting

passion's promise for the gods
of love, the delicate taste of
your honey laden promises always
gives me the sinful satisfaction
I crave to endure

splashing joy while giving all

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prompt: white zinfandel

30 words

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  • Tam
    May 7, 2008

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    wow...

    you've taken white zinfandel to a whole new level! LOL!
    what a great job...
    Thank you for sharing your time and talent with me! I’m delighted my three favorite things inspired your Muse...
    Blessings! Tammy

    • carole21
      May 8, 2008
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      thanks

      I see I forgot the flies and arms . . !! only wine . . !!


      • Tam
        May 8, 2008
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        LOL...

        hey...a good bottle of wine can't be beat!
        your poem was lovely...
        Blessings! Tammy


  • buffsab99
    May 4, 2008
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    Sensual

    Very nice take on the prompt. Great job with this