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On A Warm Moon Lit Night




I Come to your window
with my world of dreams.
I have a flower for you
and something special to share

It is soft and tender
everything
that your heart
needs to feel

I will give them in kisses
sliding down your neck
and you will respire
as I hold you
giving you my warmth.

The taste of your skin
laced with honeydew traces
of desire on your body.

Under the moon
our bodies will sway
to the sensual music
we desire to make. 


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  • celticdreamz
    May 4

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    Very desirous of your lover with beautiful lines that will be certain to woo her. I loved "I will give them in kisses". Well done! Best of luck in the contest. ~Elizabeth


  • azlyn gold member
    May 3

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    DREAMY!!! This is so beautiful and sensual...such nice things transpire under the magical light of the moon...don't they Jeff? Thank you for the entry...as always it is breath-taking!


    Az

  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    May 3

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    Lovely imagery you draw here
    with your words. Great job
    with this write and thanks for
    sharing it with us all! Good
    luck to you in this contest!




    Jeremy0826
  • individuality gold member
    May 3

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    this made me think of two flowers under the moonlight rather than people, which is a good thing, i just thought - freedom