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His Puppet..

Controlled By Him
Like A Puppet On A

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D~A~N~C~I~N~G

To His Every
Beck & Call


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Back On command
By His Emotions

Author notes

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  • redhanded
    May 4, 2008

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    hmmm...

    very nice write...I love how you put the words in a vertical line and such adds more detail to the poem...great use of words and very good sense of imagery...thankyou for entering my contest and best of luck to in the future and my contest as well...


  • Angelflower
    May 3, 2008

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    WOW!!!! this was just amazing!! I cannot get over how great this is!! wow.. You have done a great job with this piece sis! wow.. beautifully written, a lot of pain in this write.. you have done so well.. best of luck you should place with this!!!

    Jetleena