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Night Sky Reflection

The yellow moon appears...
A gentle, glowing light
Across the midnight sky.

On a cool night,
Only the stars are in sight,
Twinkling like diamonds on a
Velvet black canopy.

What's it all about?
Why on earth am I here?
Was it just an accident
Or part of a divine plan?

Right here, where I'm standing
The earth is still...
Silent, amazing
Incredible world!

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  • Amaranth Dihdzere
    May 4, 2008

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    so beautiful and i am honored to have this wonderful piece in my contest. this poem perfectly describes what i se and feel every time i look up at the sky. thank you

    • harriet567
      May 5, 2008
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      Thank you so much

      Thank you for your lovely comment. Bless you, Harriet