soft fingers caress waves
of curves
dripping in deep seas
of arousal
drenched in desire
Author notes
Prompt Foreplay
A contest entry
- Quickie no 2 ¬ 15 words Adults only by Unsigned.
300 points, ended May 4, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre Writes Party For Word Prompt Quickies Only by theredcatjazzoflove.
600 points, ended May 26, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great job for 15 words! This is very impressive! I have a question: In the pic, which one is you?
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Thank you Bruce...I wish Hahahaha
As always you've made me smile with your comment
A pleasure to have you read
~sugar~
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The imagery and power of these words are what really strikes home hun. This is truly sensuality personified. Well done on your trophy.
Darkest Love
Wayne Leon
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gosh oh my this is loaded with the tasty stuff oh my it was very hot i loved it thanks for the heat flash
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Drench me please...pick me ..pick me
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LOL!!!
~sugar~
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Great job, now this is a favorite by you.
Good luck in the contest.
Always,
Me
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This one was me, no imposter involved
Thanks sis
~sugarcookie~
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Ooh La La!
Such passion and fire wrapped in such a succinct write, well done, Sweet One! I loved your choice of alliteration, it sounds like the surf sifting across the sands. I wouldn't change anything, this is a magnificent write. Good luck in the contest! -
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Thank you GC for your fab comment
always a pleasure to have you read
~sugar~
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Perfect!
What more could you ask for in 15 words? Well done, Michelle.
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Cheers Greg
Always a pleasure to have you comment.
Luv ~sweetness~ x
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Nice picture!
You described that pic very well. Fine work, sis.
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Thanks bro
Glad you enjoyed
~sugar~
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