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The perfect rose of Texas

There is a rose in Texas, with a scent above the rest
The lovely rose of Texas is the flower we love the best
I want to go to Texas so that I can pluck this rose
And the lone star state of Texas is the only place it grows

The rose we know as Tory is the rose we love to see
The perfect rose called Tory is the rose of poetry
In the lone-star State of Texas, this perfect flower grows
It is only down in Texas where you'll find the Tory rose

The Rose that blooms in Texas where it grows fair and sweet
Is the Rose we know as Tory with the beauty that's complete
The lone star State of Texas has to love its perfect Rose
Send all your love to Texas where this perfect flower grows

The lovely rose called Tory, has a fight upon her hands
But anything attacks her and she'll fight it where she stands
I love that Rose from Texas, so I want to help her fight
So send all your love to Tory, and she'll win the fight each night

Author notes

So I borrowed "The Yellow Rose of Texas" for a bigger job!!!
Sing along with me please.

DLC-Jem offered me this background as her tribute.

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  • Griswold silver member
    May 4

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    Wonderfully done my friend. Tory read this to me over the phone last night while I was at work, well actually, she sang it to me. What a beautiful piece of work and dedication to her. She was just gushing all about it. Scott

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  • mcheadle
    May 4

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    Loved the poem

    I have a sister who was born there. her dream is to one day go back home...mac loved your write whe I know would love it also.

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  • This is really cool! I like the way you incorporated your poem into lyric form for a perfect version of Yellow rose. This is simply divine! Bravo!!
    ~S~G~

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  • Darling this is simply beautiful. I love it and I love you as well. Thanks so much to you and DLC-Jem for a wonderful masterpiece.

    I cant thank you enough...this made me smile big...really big...hey come on its about me:)

    Love you

    Tory

     


  • ennovy silver member
    May 3

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    Oh yes my friend Tory is a rose, and very special lady, a poet, a wonderful person....You have given her
    a very beautiful gift & tribute...Thanks Jeff...novy

    I just sung it and its beautiful in song too!

  • Damn it, now I have the sound of Stan Freberg echoing in my mind!

    Please, I beg you, do not write poems to ladies with the verb "pluck" it them - you know what people are like!

    Thanks for the poem to my "Something Unique".

    Here come the bunnies.


  • Amera gold member
    May 3

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    Comparing Tory to a Rose is simply beautiful! I really like this poem and I know she will too. You have been a good friend to us both and I want to thank you for that Jeff. You are a great guy and a world class poet.

    Love,
    Amera♥

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