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When did you rock the stars to sleep?

It doesn't seem fair to me;
that each bone in my body wants to rip apart
every soul that's ever hurt you...

While you continuously
tread on my fingers;
and turn the other cheek
to imaginary
curses.


It doesn't make sense to me;
that I should sleep each day
dazing in and out of consciousness
to nothing but shaking fingers.

While all I can do
is compliment each and every
color you stroked
onto my heart.






It doesn't surprise me;
that my heart stopped beating for you
in the end.

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  • Feirce.Dino
    May 3, 2008
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    Thats Sad And Sweet XD I Really Loved This Good Write Keep It Up


  • jennifer-lynn-1792
    May 3, 2008
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    i have an awkward time reading some of your personal poems, because i try to read them without having Danny as the subject matter in the back of my mind..
    that being said, i like the way you put this one. "While all i can do is compliment each and every color you stroked onto my heart." It brings a sad kind of smile to my mouth. <3


    • Fireworks
      May 3, 2008
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      Heh; luckily enough for the back of your mind,
      this poem has nothing to do with Danny.

      Thank you for the comment. <3.