Rain glittered the ground
sprinkling natures essence
to new tomorrows.
Author notes
"5-7-5" Haiku
A contest entry
- 7000 HAIKU by DogFish.
1800 points, ended May 13, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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no diamonds are so precious
nor gems buy what it offers
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Oh wow... This was just... beautiful! I just... love the wording you used!
Left me in awe.
Best of luck in your contest
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thanks
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Beautiful
Beautiful write on the arrival of spring. Never could grasp haiku from a writting standpoint but love reading it.
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wow!
Like ur ku. Heres ur tanka lines:"with tlc awaken her buds of
new to the rebirth of spring"
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Very nice
Haikus are my favorite form of poetry and nature my favorite subject to write about, (granted a majority of all Haikus are about images in nature but thats not the point)you combined the two wonderfully! very much love the feel of a soft rain and you brought me back to that. thank you for sharing!
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So refreshing...like the feel of this...
A tanka for a lovely lady--
satisfied souls linger by
to feel alive again so.
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awww thats beautiful, thanks so much
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I like your poem and I like Haikus this is a very nice one that you have done.I like the rain have a nice day
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