Just meditate a moment to give your thoughts release
Soft gentle waters trickle to bathe your mind in peace
The tinkling sound of rivers as they course through your head
All joining there together, become a sea instead.
Then swim within this ocean and float within the tide
As elements surround you and gently probe inside
They'll lift your inner feelings and take them on the tide
Replace them with new thought waves to be your constant guide.
The cleansing of the waters will wash all pain away
So seize this special moment and meditate today.
A contest entry
- - Take a Moment to Cleanse - by Desire.
700 points, ended May 6, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Meditation
This piece tugged at Spirit and as I read this several
times and was seeing a porcelain bowl of water being
poured over the head of a person...seeing as if in
India...because I am seeing symbols relating to the
culture
also hearing word: Buffet~but reference to spiritual...
fruits of labor- picked from own backyard...
Beautiful message- the last two lines fed!
Powerful images You have brought forth
These lines grabbed and pulled~
Then swim within this ocean and float within the tide
As elements surround you and gently probe inside:
Peaceful take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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