Your the someone I love
The one that I cherish
Your the someone I need
The one I don't want to perish
I think about you all day long
Your always in my heart
Your the one I love so much
I want us together, not apart
I want you here with me
I need you to be by my side
I love you like you don't even know
Because of you I've lost my mind
Your happiness is my every thing
Your one person... but to me your the world
I want you to be happy
I want to be your girl
I don't know if I'm the girl you notice
If I'm your star in the sky
But baby one thing I'll always know
Is for you, any day, I'd die
I'd die for your love
For your heart, for your mind
I'd die for just one look from you
And to be able to know inside
For just one moment
In the future I could look back and recall
for just one moment
I was in your mind, and I had it all
But for just one moment....
Author notes
My emotion of choice is love... hope ya like...
Written December 17th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Emotions by sca.
473 points, ended February 1, 2004, 37 entries
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This is great. Poems that rhyme and flow always get my attention. This one kept it. Thanks for sharing.
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great and filled with love instead of pain like the others i have read. Actually i really liked this contest poem even though i aint so keen usually. It was warm and somewhat magical too. Great work
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good poem, i like poem about love, keep writing you are good
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yours is really good! i think it is...you mentioned it, then i had to read it, and i really enjoyed it...i do understand how you feel, not with the whole thing with your friend, though...that must be really hard...if one of my friends ever did that to me, i don't know what i'd do! i hope nothing like that ever happens...anyhoo, i thought it was great, keep it up!
Happy Holidays
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This poem blew me away, im going through exactly the same at the moment. I feel for you. Cos I know how hard it is. Good work, i loved the style and the content. Very heart felt.
Martin xx -
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is this my first entrant?
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