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Stuck Inside

It's not the end of the world
But it's the end for me
Well it just might be
And this just might be
The last song I write
I can't explain
Why I feel this way
I can't stop the thought
Nothing is wrong
But I can't seem to make it right

I just want silence
I just want change
I just want to not feel this way

It's not the end of the world
But it's almost the end of my life
I don't understand
Why I feel this way
It's just too much this time
And I can't get away
From this fucking voice inside
Telling me I'll never change
I'll never live
Begging just let me die

I just want another day
Just another chance
But I've wasted every one

And I'm never going to change

Please tell me what you think

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  • Lady Altheia
    January 15

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    Hoodwinked

    I say don't listen to that voice. I ignore the voices in my head unless I am writing and they are character voices. You been hoodwinked by a Poetic Bandit.


  • doesne1care
    June 5, 2008

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    gish,,,yeh u i know your struggle and pain...beatifluuy written though..try and stay strong..u can do it.

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